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Re: Haiku: Rice Krispies
Yeah, I guess it does help you imagine the sounds. And brings back memories of eating breakfast when I was younger. Yuck, I am so sick of Rice Krispies. And ...
Dec 20, 2004 -
Re: On Catching a Falling Star
I liked it a lot. Especially the ending, reminded me of Bon Jovi's These Days.
Dec 19, 2004 -
Re: beneath the skin
Loved it. Great imagery.'..I have no constructive criticism.
Dec 19, 2004 -
Re: immortality?
I liked the first stanza, but the second one kind of lost my attention. It picked up again after that, though. Not sure what salad days is all about, but ...
Dec 16, 2004 -
Re: Give Her Wings
Good. Not really my thing, but I specifically liked the last two lines of the first stanza and the last lines of the last stanza. Good work.
Dec 8, 2004